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6．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
     增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
     删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
     修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
     注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；  2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
 Dear Jim，
I'd like tell you something about our school sports meet．It was holding on Oct.6，that was a fine day．There were over 1，000 students and teachers attend it．Wang Lin，a student from my class won the 100-meter race．He finish the race in 12.6 second and broke the school record．The sports meet was really success．That was because we were all trying to do my best．Although I was not one of the winner，I was proud of  we had done．
Looking forward to receive your letter．
Yours，
Li Ping．

分析 在这里Li Ping向Jim介绍了学校运动会的情况，有1000多名老师和学生参加了这场运动会，Wang Lin以12.6秒的成绩打破学校的100米短跑纪录．

解答 Dear Jim，
I'd like∧tell you something about our school sports meet．It was holdingon Oct.6，that was a fine day．There were over 1，000 students and teachers attend it．Wang Lin，a student from my class won the 100-meter race．He finish the race in 12.6 second and broke the school record．The sports meet was really success．That was because we were all trying to do my best．Although I was not one of the winner，I was proud of∧we had done．
Looking forward to receiveyour letter．
Yours，
Li Ping
详解：
1．tell前面加to；考查动词不定式，would like to do是固定用法，意为"愿意做某事"．
2．holding改为held；考查动词的语态，这里运动会是被举行，用被动语态，所以是过去分词．
3．that改为which；考查关系代词，这是一个非限制性定语从句，要用关系代词which引导．
4．attend改为attending；考查现在分词，这里用 现在分词短语作定语，修饰1，000 students and teachers．
5．finish改为finished；考查动词的时态，运动会是发生在过去的事情，所以此处要用过去时态．
6．second改为seconds；考查名词单复数，second作为"秒"讲是可数名词，前面有数词12.6，故用复数形式．
7．success改为successful；考查形容词，successful在这里做动词was的表语．
8．my改为our；考查形容词性物主代词，前面说的是we were trying to do …所以这里的物主代词要与we保持一致，故用our．
9．winner改为winners；考查名词的复数，one of 后面要用复数形式，表示一个范围．
10．That改为what；考查名词性从句，疑问代词what在从句中作动词的宾语．
11．receive改为receiving；考查非谓语动词，look forward to中to是介词，后跟动名词形式作宾语．

点评 短文改错首先快速阅读短文，了解短文基本大意，确定文章的基本时态，再运用语法，词汇，习惯性短语等基础知识进一步分析各个句子，找出文中的错误加以修改．

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30．What will the winner get？D
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D.30，000as personal college fund．
31．The underlined part in Paragraph 4shows that creating a Doodle can beC．
A．easy         
B．funny          
C．difficult        
D．Relaxing．

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