题目内容
【题目】随着经济的发展和人们生活水平的提高,近年各地旅游景点人满为患,尤其是一些历史名胜,如长城、紫禁城和各地大型博物馆等等。看到这种趋势,一些旅游景点开始考虑提高门票,并把此消息在各大网站上发布,这在全国引起了一场热烈的讨论,观点如下:
支持者: | 1. 促进当地经济的发展。 2. 景点需要雇佣更多的工作人员提供服务并尽快清理游客留下的垃圾。 3. 门票提高可以确保建筑物的维修。 |
反对者: | 1. 人们将失去休闲放松的地方。 2. 阻碍人们尤其是青少年了解中国的历史和文化。 3. 对于有历史意义的名胜政府应该提供经济援助,而不是依赖民众多掏腰包。 |
你的观点: | 表明态度,列举至少两点理由 |
参考词汇:maintenance 维修(n.) financial 经济的,金融的
注意:1. 对所给要点,逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2. 字数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总字数。
With the development of our country’s economy and the people’s living standards improving,a lot of tourism attractions in different areas have witnessed a great increase of tourists in recent years, in which case some tourism sites are considering adopting higher tickets fees and have given out the news on various websites. People have held a heated discussion about it and opinions on it are divided ._____________________________.
【答案】
With the development of our country’s economy and the people’s living conditions improving,a lot of tourism attractions in different areas have witnessed a great increase of tourists in recent years, in which case some tourism sites cre considering adopting higher ticket fees and have given out the news on various websites. People have held a heated discussion about it and opinions on it are divided.
The supporters think the first reason is that the increase of ticket fees can promote the local economy. Secondly, the tourist attractions need more employees to provide timely service and remove the garbages left by the tourists as quickly as possible.Besides,the maintenance of the buildings also needs a large amount of money.
On the other hand, those who are against it list their reasons as follows.First of all,it will make people lose the places for relaxation. Next, this move will discourage people especially teenagers from learning about the Chinese history and culture. Last but not least, faced with this situation, our government rather than the average public are supposed to give financial support.
However, I’m on the side of those opponents. Because we need some opportunities to enrich our life and broaden our horizon. In addition, I must remind those tourists who have the habit to litter around to watch their behavior in public places, which can more or less reduce the work of the tourism sites.
【解析】
试题分析:写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示,认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系,然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。本文的主题是对热门景点门票上涨的讨论,给出了主要的观点,学生的语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】学生要根据提纲写出全部的观点并添加自己的观点。文章使用了很好的短语和句子:promote, timely service,rather than而不是,a large amount of,discourage,on the side of,broaden our horizon开阔眼界,litter around乱扔垃圾,句型丰富多变:the first reason is that the increase of ticket fees can promote the local economy表语从句,who are against it list their reasons as follows.定语从句,who have the habit to litter around定语从句,which can more or less reduce the work of the tourism sites.非限制性定语从句,文章的一大特色是运用了多样的连接词,比如:Secondly,Besides,On the other hand,Next,Last but not least,In addition使得文章条理清晰、结构明了。
【题目】假如你叫李平,你的美国笔友Tom来信询问你十一假期过的怎样。请根据表格中信息给他回信,说明你在十一假期中的活动和理由。
活动 | 理由 |
休息 | 学习紧张,缺少锻炼和休息 |
看望乡下的祖父母 | 帮助他们做点家务,并给他们谈了身边的 新鲜事 |
和朋友进行短途旅游 | 欣赏大自然,呼吸新鲜空气 |
注意:词数100左右。