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【题目】假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1).每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is a joke of the fire alarm. When Sophie was cleaning the blackboard after his class ended last night, the fire alarm went off. The alarm was sounded like the busy signal on the phone, but 1,000 times loud. Instead of leave the building, she walked about to see that the problem was. The school seemed to be empty. Then she walked by one room, but saw about seven students inside. She told everyone to leave immediate, and after almost five minutes, both of them left the building. Then a school police office arrived the school and walked around the area. He said it was a false alarm and used his key to turn down the alarm.

Answer 1

【答案】①his→her； ②去掉was； ③loud→louder ； ④leave→leaving ；⑤that→what ； ⑥but→and ； ⑦immediate→immediately ； ⑧both→all ； ⑨arrived后加at； ⑩down→off

【解析】本文是一个关于火警的笑话。

①考查代词。根据Sophie可知是女性，故把his改为her。

②考查动词。sound听起来，是不及物动词，故去掉was。

③考查形容词。 句意：大1000倍，用比较级，故把loud改为louder。

④考查动名词。instead of后跟名词或动名词，故把leave改为leaving。

⑤考查宾语从句。 see后面是一个宾语从句，宾语从句缺少引导词，缺少表语，故把that改为what。

⑥考查连词。 句意：他步行经过一个房间，看见七个学生在里面。此处是递进关系，而不是转折关系，故把but改为and。

⑦考查副词。 副词修饰动词，故把immediate改为immediately。

⑧考查代词。 因为前面提到是七个学生，故把both改为all。

⑨考查介词。 arrive at+小地点；arrive in+大地点，“到达学校”，故在arrived后加at。

⑩考查副词。 固定词组：turn off“关掉”；turn down“拒绝”。“关掉警报器”，故把down改为off。