Question

【题目】假定你是光明中学的李华，得知某英文网站“Story”栏目正在面向中学生征稿，标题为“The moment I take pride in”，请你写一篇英文稿件，包括以下要点：

1. When was it?

2. What did you do?

3. Why did you do it?

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

The moment I take pride in

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Answer 1

【答案】The moment I take pride in

Where there is a will, there is a way. When I began to learn to cook three years ago, I failed many times. But in the end, what was cooked by me was very delicious, because I carried on with it.

The first dish was fried eggs. At first, it was difficult for me to control the temperature of oil. In order to learn it well，a great number of eggs were wasted. I never gave up until I fried eggs better.

The reason why I learned to cook was that my mother could rest after she finished her work. I will keep the moment in my heart.

【解析】

本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇英文稿件。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一篇英文稿件：假定你是光明中学的李华，得知某英文网站“Story”栏目正在面向中学生征稿，标题为“The moment I take pride in”，请你写一篇英文稿件，包括以下要点：1. When was it?2. What did you do?3. Why did you do it?

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：Where there is a will, there is a way.（有志者事竟成）；in the end（最后）；fried eggs（煎鸡蛋）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。