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某英文网站正在开展关于“高一是否该分文理科”的讨论。请你根据下面所给的要点提示,用英语写一篇短文,描述目前存在的两种看法,并陈述你的观点,以便向该网站投稿。

赞成分科的人认为
反对分科的人认为
你的观点
1. 可集中精力学习;
2. 减轻学习压力;
3. 学自己喜欢的学科。
1. 学科知识受限制;
2. 影响个人素质提高;
3. 对科目缺乏深入了解。
……
注意:1.词数:120词左右;
2.参考词汇:quality  n.素质    division  n.分科   all-round  adj.全面的
3. 短文的开头已给出,不计入词数。
In recent days, a discussion is being carried on about whether we should be grouped as either someone pursuing liberal arts or science in grade one.
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In recent days, a discussion is being carried on about whether we should be grouped as either someone pursuing liberal arts or science in grade one.
Some of us prefer the division to be made as early as possible so that they can concentrate on either liberal arts or science courses. If so, they can reduce the pressure of study and choose the subjects they like best.
However, some others hold quite different opinions. They argue that they are limited in their knowledge of liberal arts or science if grouped earlier, which will affect improving their personal quality and mastering all-round knowledge. On the other hand, they will find it difficult to make a wise decision since they haven’t had a deep/thorough understanding of each subject.
Personally, I hope one day the school system will be more flexible so that we’re free to take some courses as we like.

解析试题分析:本篇写作题材是外教的两种不同观点。这种文章一般层次比较清晰,四段:第一段为总述;第二段正方观点及依据;第三段反方观点及依据;第四段自己观点。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化;2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断,要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式,按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文,划分好文章的自然段落,注意段落之间的发展和连贯。尽量使用不同长度的句子,使句型多样化。适当使用连词,使句子间的衔接自然流畅。
【亮点说明】范文观点明确,结构清晰,好的词组和句子有:as early as possible尽可能早的, On the other hand,另一方面, If so, they can reduce the pressure of study and choose the subjects they like best. 这句话用了省略句和定语从句, They argue that they are limited in their knowledge of liberal arts or science if grouped earlier, which will affect improving their personal quality and mastering all-round knowledge. 这句话用了非限制性定语从句, they will find it difficult to make a wise decision since they haven’t had a deep/thorough understanding of each subject.这句话用了it做形式宾语, Personally, I hope one day the school system will be more flexible so that we’re free to take some courses as we like.这句话用了结果状语从句。
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【写作内容】
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