题目内容
【题目】假如你是某外国语学校学生李华,第九届金砖国家峰会(The Ninth BRICS Summit)将在你居住的城市举办。组委会现正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容包括:
1.个人情况:年龄、性别;
2.个人条件:英、法语爱好,关注时事、政治和经济,善于交际,乐于助人,熟悉本地;
3.本人承诺:提供最佳服务。
注意:1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir and Madam,
My name is Li Hua._________________________________________________________________________
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I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir and Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I am writing this letter as I would like to volunteer to help at the ninth BRICS Summit.
I’m an 18-year-old man from Tianjin and I’m studying at a foreign language school. I would love to help out when the BRICS Summit takes place in my hometown. To begin with, I have a good knowledge of both English and French. My main interests also happen to be politics, the economy and current affairs. Furthermore, I’m skilled at communicating with others. I’m the captain of my class debate team- and I always enjoy helping others. Last but not least, there is no doubt that I’m familiar with our city, which will surely be of great importance to the job.
If given the chance, I'll spare no effort to provide the best service to those who need it. I would appreciate it if you could respond to my application. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】本文是提纲类文章,通过书信的格式来向组委会介绍自己的个人条件,个人性格,以及个人条件,文章主体应该以一般现在时为主,并且做到句子精炼,主题明确。要点要齐全,并且使用适当的连接词,使上下文行文流畅;行文思路要有逻辑性,条例清晰,这篇文章是一篇普通简单文章,要想做到出众,就要多使用高级词汇,复杂句式等优秀词句,使老师眼前一亮。
【范文亮点】
文章开头以“I am writing this letter as I would like to volunteer to help at the ninth BRICS Summit.”直击主题,说明自己的意图,第二段写出自己的优点,首先使用“I would love to help out ”意思是我愿意帮助....优秀句式,同时使用“have a good knowledge of ”意思是有....优点等短语,其中“there is no doubt that ”是固定句式,意思是不容置疑的。多次使用高级短语,句式,是篇很好的文章。