Question

最近，随着天气越来越冷，对于学校早起跑操的规定，不少学生不愿意积极参加。其实，早起对成长中的学生是有很多好处的。请你根据以下提示写一篇关于早起有益的短文。

1. 早起锻炼可使身体强壮；

2. 早起朗读，有助于记住学过的东西；

3. 可为一天的学习生活做好准备；

4. 坚持早起对培养好的性格也有益处。

参考词汇：性格 (character)

词数：100左右。 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Getting up early is a good habit.

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Answer 1

Getting up early is a good habit. It is of great importance to our health, our study and our life.First, it can help us to keep fit and strong. We can improve our health by doing morning exercises, walking, running in the open air. Second, getting up early and reading aloud can help memorize what we have learned easily.Third, if we get up early, we don’t need to be in a hurry to go to school or work without having breakfast.So we’ll have a very good mood all day.If we stick to it, it will benefit us a lot, especially in our character-making.

【解析】这是一篇给定观点型的短文写作。主要为早起是个好习惯提供支持的观点，在罗列分析时应注意观点之间的链接，做到清晰有序，文章最后应有适当总结，使文章结构分明。第二句It is of great importance to our health, our study and our life开篇点明观点，早起对健康、学习、生活很重要，be of great importance to对……至关重要；第三句直接阐述支持观点的理由First, it can help us to keep fit and strong，对应早起对健康的重要；第五句点出早起对学习的好处Second, getting up early and reading aloud can help memorize what we have learned easily中what引导宾语从句；第六句Third, if we get up early, we don’t need to be in a hurry to go to school or work without having breakfast，if引导条件状语从句表述第三个理由，早起对生活的好处，be in hurry to do sth和without doing sth的巧用使得句子富有变化；第八句If we stick to it, it will benefit us a lot, especially in our character-making提出建议，结束全文。总结：阐述观点时应注意先后顺序，其次应灵活运用词语形式的变换使得句子不仅通顺流畅，也不会太过平淡无味

考点：考查给定观点型写作