题目内容
请根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。
There is no such thing as a free lunch. Success doesn’t come to anyone who sits back and does nothing at all. As they say, “As you sow, so shall you reap(收获).”
注意:1. 无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示;
2. 除诗歌外,文体不限;
3 .文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
4. 词数为120左右。
Everyone has a desire for success while success only belongs to the hard-working people. As the old saying goes, “no pains, no gains.”
I failed in the last exam. So discouraged was I that I didn’t want to do anything. I didn’t do exercises and even attend to what the teacher said in the classes. Later on, I found things got even worse. Meanwhile, a great many students made every effort to study. Only then did I realize I was wrong and that success will not wait for me. So I made the best of every minute to catch up with my classmates. Now I’m progressing in my studies. I feel confident that my effort will pay off eventually.
My story makes me believe failure is temporary for a diligent person but permanent for the lazy. One’s efforts will surely be rewarded with success no matter how big or small the success is.
解析试题分析:考查开放性作文。开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
【亮点说明】范文用了一些常见短语: have a desire for 渴望,belong to属于,make every effort to do努力做…,make the best of 充分利用,catch up with赶上, pay off成功,有回报,还有范文中的句式也很出彩:As the old saying goes, “no pains, no gains.”这句话用了非限制性定语从句,So discouraged was I that I didn’t want to do anything.这句话用了倒装句,I didn’t do exercises and even attend to what the teacher said in the classes. 这句话用了宾语从句, Only then did I realize I was wrong and that success will not wait for me. 这句话也用了倒装句,. One’s efforts will surely be rewarded with success no matter how big or small the success is.这句话用了让步状语从句。
考点:考查开放式书面表达
作文:最近,你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论.讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况.
| 60%的同学认为 | 40%的同学认为 |
| 1.不应收门票 | 1.应收门票,但票价不宜高 |
| 2.公园是公众休闲的地方 | 2.支付园林工人工资 |
| 3.如收票,需建大门,围墙,会影响城市形象 | 3.购新花木 |
2. 词数: 100 左右.
3. 参考词汇: 门票--- entrance fees
良好的人际关系是建设和谐社会的关键。假设你是李华,最近你校对“中学生如何交友?”的话题展开讨论,大家发表了不同的看法。请你根据下面所给内容,写一封信给《21世纪报 高中生版》“Your Words”栏目,反映讨论情况。并说明你对如何交友的看法。
| 为何交友 | 建立良好的人际关系,构建和谐社会 | | |
| 交友对象 | 学习上的朋友 | 互帮互学,促进提高…… | |
| 生活上的朋友 | 互助互利,摆脱困境…… | | |
| 情感上的朋友 | 倾诉烦恼,分享喜悦…… | | |
| 如何交友 | (联系自己,拟定内容,列举两至三点。) | | |
Dear editor,
Recently our class have had a heated discussion on how middle school students should make friends. ......
Yours ever,
Li Hua