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作文:最近,你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论.讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况.

60%的同学认为
40%的同学认为
1.不应收门票
1.应收门票,但票价不宜高
2.公园是公众休闲的地方
2.支付园林工人工资
3.如收票,需建大门,围墙,会影响城市形象
3.购新花木
注意: 1. 信的开头已为你写好.
2. 词数: 100 左右.
3. 参考词汇: 门票--- entrance fees


Dear editor,
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.
Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.
On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.
Yours truly
Li Hua

解析试题分析:作文以英文报组织的一场讨论,围绕公园要不要收票进行阐述,有不同的观点,认真审题,知道要点内容,注意分段,第一段是话题,第二段是赞成的观点,第三段的反对的观点,把要点加以整理,用适当的句型进行概括;概括时可以主要用简单句,也可以适当用复杂句,但要确保复杂句使用正确;切记要点要全,不要遗漏;注意语法正确,单词拼写正确,字体干净。
【亮点说明】文章的结构符合正反方的观点的框架,语言既简练,有不乏好的短语和句子:free of charge 免费,no doubt毫无疑问,keep … away远离,定语从句 People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves.和非限制性定语从句: it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.虚拟语气:They suggest, however, fees should be charged low. 还有文章还用了On the other hand,What is more,这些关联的词使文章更加连贯。
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【写作内容】
1、以约30词概括上文的主要内容;
2、以约120词谈谈你阅读了该故事后的感受,内容包括:
(1) 当时在场的人是怎样的一种心理?
(2) 如果你当时也在场,你将如何处理?
(3) 你对整个事件作如何评价?
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2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

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