Question

【题目】下图描述的是你上学途中发生的事。现请你根据图画内容写一篇100~120词的日记。

注意：日记的开头已经为你写好，不计入词数。

参考词汇：a calling card（名片）；a public telephone（公用电话）

October the 23rd, Monday Sunny

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Answer 1

【答案】October the 23rd, Monday Sunny

This morningon my way to school,I found a wallet near the bus station.I opened the wallet and found a lot of money and a calling card,so I knew the owner’s name,address and telephone number.Thinking the owner must be very worried, I went to a public telephone and called the owner.Then I waited at the bus station.After a while a lady, the owner of the purse, came by taxi.I immediately gave the wallet to her.The owner was so thankful that she took out a 100-yuan note to reward me. I politely refused it and continued my way to school.

Though I was a bit later for school, I felt happy because I did something helpful.

【解析】这是一篇看图作文。根据题干可知：图片描述的是你上学途中发生的事。现要求你根据图画内容写一篇100~120词的日记。

同时要注意以下几点：

1.通篇以一般过去时态为主。

2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。

3.注意故事的衔接性和逻辑性。

【范文亮点】

1. 文章层次分明，要点齐全，准确完整的将图片传达的信息表示了出来，语言生动流畅。

2.此外，文章还运用了＂The owner was so thankful that she took out a 100-yuan note to reward me.＂so ··that从句以及“Though I was a bit later for school, I felt happy because I did something helpful.”让步从句等。