题目内容
【题目】假设你是红星中学高二(1)班学生李华。你们学校即将举行建校50周年庆典,届时将有外国友人参加。因此,校学生会拟招聘英语主持人。请根据以下信息写一封英文申请信。
性格 | 热情开朗,有亲和力 |
能力 | 发音标准,声音洪亮,临场应变能力强 |
其他 | …… |
注意:1.词数不少于60。
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:校庆 anniversary
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua from Class 1, Senior Grade 2.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua from Class 1, Senior Grade 2. I’m writing to apply for the position as the host for the 50th anniversary of our school.
I am a healthy and optimistic boy of 178 centimeters in height. Not only am I easygoing and full of passion, but also I am responsible and willing to put efforts to work. Moreover, I believe good teamwork and communication are also my strengths. As to qualifications for this position, I speak in a loud and clear voice. Three years’ learning experiences in America enable me to have good English pronunciation which is highly spoken of by my teachers and classmates. In addition, I am quick in responding to different situations on the stage due to my hosting experience in many parties and activities in our school.
I hope to be the host because I would like to do my bit for our school on such a special occasion. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】校学生会拟招聘英语主持人,本文是一篇申请信,内容如下:热情开朗,有亲和力;发音标准,声音洪亮,临场应变能力强;其他---。根据所给提示并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用。根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】
本文是一封申请信,格式正确,采用三段式,内容紧扣主题,文章结构布局合理,文中使用高级句子。Not only am I easygoing and full of passion, but also I am responsible and willing to put efforts to work.句子使用部分倒装;As to qualifications for this position, as to的运用巧妙至极;Three years’ learning experiences in America enable me to have good English pronunciation which is highly spoken of by my teachers and classmates. which引导定语从句;另外,Moreover, In addition, due to,looking forward to等的运用为文章增色添彩。