Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sir,

I have just read on the newspaper that an English language secretary is wanting in your company. Therefore, I’m writing to introduce me and apply for the position.

I am a 22-years-old female university student, that studies in the English Department of Yunnan University. I do very much well in English listening, speaking, and translation. I can speak and read little French as a second foreign language. Last summer, I also work as a tourist guide and the boss I worked for were very satisfied with my work. You will know more about me whether I come for an interview.

Best wishes.

Yours faithfully,

Li Ming

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