题目内容
2.第一节 短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dear Jack,
Thanks for your letter.I'm glad you've been offered two summer jobs at same time-working in a restaurant and working in a museum.If I were him,I would take the one in the museum.
First,you can gain more knowledge about history,that will enrich your life great.Second,you can make more friend from different parts of the country by serve them when working there.Finally,compared to the job in the restaurant,working in the museum can be most challenging.If you find a position at there,I'm sure you'11see a rapid improve in both your
character or abilities.You will also have a great time.
Good luck!
Yours,
Li Hua
分析 本文是一封信,在信中李华对于杰克在暑假找了两份工作给出了自己的看法:首先,能学到更多的历史知识,这会极大地丰富自己的生活.其次,可以交到更多的朋友.最后,能在性格和能力方面都会有迅速的进步.
解答 1.at后加the
2.him→you
3.that→which
4.great→greatly
5.friend→friends
6.serve→serving
7.most→more
8.删去at
9.improve→improvement
10.or-→and
详解:
1.at后加the;考查冠词.at the same time是固定短语,意为"同时",所以在at后加the.
2.him→you;考查代词.句意:如果我是你,我就接受在博物馆的工作.根据上下文可知,这是写给"你"的信,所以him改为you.
3.that→which考查非限制性定语从句的关系词.句意:首先,你能学到更多的历史知识,这会极大地丰富你的生活.本句是非限制性定语从句,用which指代前面句子的内容,所以that改为which.
4.great→greatly;考查副词.句意:,这会极大地丰富你的生活.修饰动词enrich应用副词形式,所以great改为greatly.
5.friend→friends;考查名词复数.句意:你可以交到更多的朋友.根据句意可知应用复数形式.
6.serve→serving; 考查动名词,介词by后接动名词,故serve改为serving.
7.most→more; 考查比较级,句意:和在餐厅的工作相比,在博物馆工作更具挑战性.根据语境可知这里需要用比较级,故用more加多音节形容词challenging构造比较级,故most改为more.
8.删去at; 考察介词的用法,此句中的副词there前面不需要用介词at,故删去at.
9.improve→improvement; 考察名词,句意:我保证你能在性格和能力方面都会有迅速的进步.根据前面的a rapid可知这里用名词,故improve改为improvement.
10.or→and; 本题考查固定结构.both…and两者都,故or改为and.
点评 做短文改错题时,可依据"动词形,名词数,注意形和副;非谓动词细辨别,习惯用法要记住;句子结构多分析,逻辑错误须关注"的口诀行事.
Football season started in September and all summer long I worked out.I carried my football everywhere for (43)A.
Just before September,Miller was struck by a car and lost his right arm.I went to see him after he came back from (44)C.He looked very(45)A,but he didn't cry.
That season,I (46)B all of Miller's records while he (47)D the home games from the bench.We went 10-1and I was named most valuable player,(48)C I often had crazy dreams in which I was to blame for Miller's (49)C.
One afternoon,I was crossing the field to go home and saw Miller (50)A going over a fence-which wasn't (51)B to climb if you had both arms.I'm sure I was the last person in the world he wanted to accept (52)C from.But even that challenge he accepted.I(53)B him move slowly over the fence.When we were finally(54)D on the other side,he said to me,"You know,I didn't tell you this during the season,but you did(55)A.Thank you for filling in for (56)C."
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| 41.A.cheering for | B.beating out | C.relying on | D.staying with |
| 42.A.coach | B.student | C.teacher | D.player |
| 43.A.practice | B.show | C.comfort | D.pleasure |
| 44.A.school | B.vacation | C.hospital | D.training |
| 45.A.pale | B.calm | C.relaxed | D.ashamed |
| 46.A.held | B.broke | C.set | D.tried |
| 47.A.reported | B.judged | C.organized | D.watched |
| 48.A.and | B.then | C.but | D.thus |
| 49.A.decision | B.mistake | C.accident | D.sacrifice |
| 50.A.stuck | B.hurt | C.tired | D.lost |
| 51.A.steady | B.hard | C.fun | D.fit |
| 52.A.praise | B.advice | C.assistance | D.apology |
| 53.A.let | B.helped | C.had | D.noticed |
| 54.A.dropped | B.ready | C.trapped | D.safe |
| 55.A.fine | B.wrong | C.quickly | D.normally |
| 56.A.us | B.yourself | C.me | D.them |
| 57.A.memories | B.ideas | C.attitudes | D.dreams |
| 58.A.still | B.also | C.yet | D.just |
| 59.A.challenged | B.cured | C.invited | D.admired |
| 60.A.healthier | B.bigger | C.cleverer | D.cooler. |
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Later,back home I thought of my adoptive (34)C My dad died a few years ago,but my mom is still alive.I told that to her."They're great people,"I said,"but you're (35)A my mom.You and Dad raised me,and you did a great job."
| 21.A.Since | B.Though | C.If | D.When |
| 22.A.get | B.keep | C.help | D.bring |
| 23.A.love | B.stop | C.understand | D.support |
| 24.A.seriously | B.weakly | C.politely | D.happily |
| 25.A.by touch | B.by necessity | C.by chance | D.by force |
| 26.A.filled with | B.meant for | C.designed for | D.supplied with |
| 27.A.school | B.family | C.trip | D.store |
| 28.A.visit | B.appoint | C.locate | D.demand |
| 29.A.like | B.as | C.except | D.with |
| 30.A.tears | B.feelings | C.pity | D.anger |
| 31.A.invitations | B.messages | C.goods | D.roses |
| 32.A.close | B.noisy | C.open | D.loose |
| 33.A.laughed | B.shouted | C.glanced | D.stared |
| 34.A.kids | B.relatives | C.parents | D.friends |
| 35.A.still | B.then | C.yet | D.even |
One morning,there was a knock at door of the elder brother.He(38)Bit and found a man standing beside the door."I'm a carpenter(木匠).I'm (39)A a few days'work.Perhaps you would have a few small jobs I could help with."
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"Do you know the name of the bridge?"The carpenter asked.
"No,"the elder brother was(49)B.
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| 36.A.meeting | B.question | C.decision | D.quarrel |
| 37.A.forgive | B.like | C.speak | D.think |
| 38.A.got | B.opened | C.shut | D.left |
| 39.A.looking for | B.looking at | C.looking on | D.looking up |
| 40.A.See | B.Watch | C.Observe | D.Look |
| 41.A.river | B.face | C.farm | D.eyes |
| 42.A.wall | B.bridge | C.road | D.fence |
| 43.A.excited | B.pleased | C.moved | D.surprised |
| 44.A.begun | B.done | C.finished | D.continued |
| 45.A.surprised | B.happy | C.anxious | D.sad |
| 46.A.house | B.fence | C.bridge | D.river |
| 47.A.till | B.between | C.across | D.to |
| 48.A.field | B.side | C.end | D.stage |
| 49.A.disappointed | B.puzzled | C.amazed | D.worrie |
| 50.A.love | B.hate | C.joy | D.anger |
| 51.A.everything | B.nothing | C.anything | D.something |
| 52.A.river | B.fence | C.farm | D.wall |
| 53.A.brought | B.took | C.held | D.clapped |
| 54.A.smiles | B.sadness | C.anger | D.tears |
| 55.A.leave | B.get | C.stay | D.work |