题目内容
【题目】目前高三学生普遍感到学习负担重,困此,焦虑、忧郁等多种心理问题日益突出。为此,你校学生会成立了快乐俱乐部(Happy Club)。请用英语写一个书面通知,准备刊登在你校英文校刊上,欢迎高三学生加入该俱乐部。内容要点如下:
1.宗旨:帮助学生以积极乐观的态度面对问题,迎接挑战。
2.活动内容:(1)定期请专家开讲座,解决心理问题
(2)组织讨论,交流学习经验
(3)请你再拟定两项活动
3.活动时间:周六下午
4.报名方式:在学生会填写申请表或在校园网上登记
注意:(1)不要简单翻译所给要点,要有行当发挥;
(2)词数150,短文中已写出的部分不计入总词数;
(3)参考词江:心理的;学生会
Do you feel stressed up? Do you want to keep up a good state of mind? Why not join our Happy Club?
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Don’t hesitate. It’ll be great fun!
【答案】Do you feel stressed up? Do you want to keep up a good state of mind? Why not join our Happy Club?
Our club aims to help Senior 3 students learn to take a positive attitude towards the problems they meet with, so that they can keep up spirit to face the challenges of the college entrance examination.
We will organize colorful activities. Firstly, we will invite experts regularly to give lectures on psychological problems. You can pour out your trouble to them and ask them for advice.
Secondly, discussion will often be held, where you can exchange and share each other’s learning experience and explore efficient learning methods.
Finally, we will also hold parties at weekends, trying to create a relaxing atmosphere for all the participants. In addition, we will organize tours of scenic spots, providing you with chances of enjoying the outdoors to rid you of anxiety and depression.
Activities will be fixed on Saturday afternoon. There are two ways you can join our club: fill out an application form in the Students’ Union or register at the campus website.
Don’t’ hesitate, it’ll be great fun!
【解析】试题分析:
为缓解高三学生的焦虑,忧郁等心里压力,校学生会成立了快乐俱乐部(Happy Club),本文要求写一个书面通知,刊登在英文校刊上,欢迎高三学生加入快乐俱乐部。文章给出了提纲,成文时应注意以下几点:(1)内容要点齐全。 (2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态:一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语,使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型,以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点,列出提纲:第一部分:加入俱乐部原因(帮助学生以积极乐观的态度面对问题,迎接挑战);第二段:活动设置(依次陈述活动,用Firstly, Secondly, Finally以及In addition使这部分看起来是一个整体,这部分是本文的中心段落);第三段:活动时间安排,参与方法以及呼吁大家积极参加。
【亮点说明】
1.使用高级句型:非限制性定语从句Secondly, discussion will often be held, where you can exchange and share each other’s learning experience and explore efficient learning methods..;现在分词providing…做伴随状语In addition, we will organize tours of scenic spots, providing you with chances of enjoying the outdoors to rid you of anxiety and depression;将来时的被动语态Activities will be fixed on Saturday afternoon.。2.使用了过渡词语:Firstly, Secondly,Finally 等。3.使用了重要短语:keep up保持;pour out倾诉,倒出;In addition除此以外。