题目内容
假设你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记,记述你周末或在假期中帮助家人做家务的一次经历。
写作要点:
1.做家务的理由;
2.做家务的过程;
3.你的感受。
注意:
词数不少于100字;
开头已给不计入总词数;
不可写真实姓名。注意时态。
I am an 18-year-old middle school student. _________________________
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I’m an 18-year-old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.
Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly, I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floors.
At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.
【解析】
试题分析:题目要求根据所给要点写一篇周记,记述帮家人做家务的一次经历。写作要求包括:做家务的理由;做家务的过程;自己的感受三个方面。词数在100词左右,注意开头和结尾不计入总词数;不能出现真实姓名,注意时态的正确使用;不要出现标点和拼写错误,尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观;注意行文的连贯性。
亮点说明:
范文使用了一些重要的语法知识:非谓语动词Feeling quite sorry for that,scattered in the rooms;宾语从句what to do to help;时间状语从句when my parents went out shopping;让步状语从句Tired as I was等,语法知识使用得当,叙事清晰;
范文注意使用了现在完成时、一般现在时、一般过去时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事情,对时态有较好的把握;
范文注意使用频度副词seldom, never等来表示强调,使表达更加生动;
范文使用了很多固定短语:help...with,begin to,think about,put ... in place等,使作文内容更加充实;
范文注意使用Last Sunday, Firstly, Then, After that, At this very moment等来衔接句子和段落,表示事情发生的时间顺序,使作文更有条理,做到了行文连贯。
考点:材料类作文