Question

14．假定你是李华，下面四幅图描绘了发生在你上学路上的一件事情，请根据图片内容用英语写一篇短文．

I was walking to school this morning when I caught sight of an old woman with a walking stick lying on the ground．I quickly ran over to help her up and asked her what waswrong with her．She told me she slipped and fell due to heart trouble．I was worried and decided totake her to a hospital．And then I went to a department store near the hospital and contactedher family．Soon her son and daughter came to the hospital．They thanked and praised mefor my kindness by writing me a thank-you letter．Although I was late for school today，I felt very proud of what Ihad done．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是图画类作文，要求根据四幅图的先后顺序描述上学路上发生的一件事．
在写作时，人称以第一和第三人称为主．时态以一般过去时为主．根据情景的发展，抓住细节按顺序安排好材料．
重要短语：catch sight of（看见），lie on the ground （躺在路上），run over（跑过去 ），due to（由于），heart trouble （心脏病），decide to do （决定做），contact sb（联系某人），praised sb for sth（因…而赞扬某人），be late for（迟到）．

【高分句型】
1．I was walking to school this morning when I caught sight of an old woman with a walking stick lying on the ground．
①这里用了固定句型"sb was/were doing when+另一个动作"，某人正在做某事，就在此时又发生了另一个动作．我正在上学的路上，就在此时看到了拄着拐杖的老妇人正躺在路上．
②现在分词lying作an old woman的后置定语，表示动作正在进行．相当于定语从句an old woman who was lying on the ground．
2．Although I was late for school today，I felt very proud of what I had done．
这里是由although引导的让步状语从句，逗号之后是主句．虽然我上学迟到了，但觉得很自豪．

解答 I was walking to school this morning when I caught sight of an old womanwith a walking stick lying on the ground．【高分句型】（Picture 1    上学路上看到摔倒在路上的老人）
I quickly ran over to helpher up and asked her what was wrong with her．She told me she slipped and fell due to heart trouble．（Picture 2    主动扶起老人并询问情况）
I was worried and decided to take her toa hospital．And then I went to a department store near the hospital and contactedher family．（Picture 3   送老人到医院并等待其家人）
Soon her son and daughter came to the hospital．They thanked and praised mefor my kindness by writing me a thank-you letter．（Picture 4  老人的家人赶到并对我的善举表示感谢）
Although I was late forschool today，I felt very proud of what I had done．【高分句型】（感想）

点评 写作看图作文时，首先认真看图，结合图片和文字，确定所要表达的主题是什么，然后围绕主题，提炼要点，合理想象，对译出的要点通过合理的组合，加上必要的连接词使表达连贯．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．