题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华。你们市要举行一年一度的国际风筝节,你的英国朋友Joe对中国的文化很感兴趣,因此 你想邀请他参加。请依据下列要点,给Joe写封电子邮件:
1. 风筝节的时间、地点;
2. 活动安排。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Joe,
How is everything going with you? I’m writing to tell you a piece of good news that the International Kite Festival of this year will be held in the Central park in our city from next Saturday to Sunday. Knowing that you have an appetite for Chinese culture, I sincerely invite you to participate in it.
During the festival, you can enjoy many colorful and splendid shows by players from around the world. Besides, many experts will show people how to make kites and direct them to make their own kites. What’s more, a lot of pictures about kites will be shown during the festival, which I think will make you have a better knowledge of the history of kites.
Hoping to see you then. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇要求考生写一封邮件给朋友介绍一年一度的风筝节。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时
结构:总分
要求:1.表明写信目的
2. 介绍风筝节
1)风筝节的时间,地点
2)风筝节的活动安排
3. 希望朋友可以来参加
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
I am writing to tell you/ have a taste for/be interested in/ invite sb to do sth /hold/be made of/ from all over the world/ have a good knowledge of/ take part in
第三步:连词成句
How is everything going with you?
I’m writing to tell you a piece of good news that the International Kite Festival of this year will be held in the Central park in our city from next Saturday to Sunday.
I sincerely invite you to participate in it.
During the festival, you can enjoy many colorful shows by players from around the world.
Many experts will show people how to make kites and direct them to make their own kites.
A lot of pictures about kites will be shown during the festival.
I think it will make you have a better knowledge of the history of kites.
Hoping to see you then. Best wishes!
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词)
1. 表文章结构顺序:first of all; to start with; firstly;in the end,;at last…
2. 表并列补充关系:what’s more,;besides; in addition; as well as;last but not the least…
3. 表因果关系:because; as; so…
第五步:修改润色 (加入从句或高级词汇)