Question

【题目】近年来，中学生普遍缺乏自我保护意识，这一问题备受关注，请你用英语写一篇短文：

1．概述中学生自我保护的重要性；

2．就如何保护自己，谈谈你的看法(至少两点)。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．开头已写好，不计入总词数。

Recently，it has been a great public concern that the students lack selfprotection awareness.

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently，it has been a great public concern that the students lack selfprotection awareness.

There is a lack of social experience among students and therefore learning how to protect ourselves is of great significance to us all. For one thing，security comes first. Without security，we can achieve nothing and cannot live up to parents’ expectations. For another thing，protecting ourselves contributes to the healthy development of the students，which is associated with the happiness of every family. Meanwhile，it also helps to build a more harmonious society.

Personally，in order to protect us students，above all，we should strengthen our security awareness. Besides，when accidents occur，we should calm down and turn to teachers or parents for help. The government also plays a leading role in protecting students. In a word，only by the combined efforts of every side involved can we live and study in harmony.

【解析】本题考查提纲类作文。首先要认真审题，近年来，中学生普遍缺乏自我保护意识，这一问题备受关注，请你用英语写一篇短文：1．概述中学生自我保护的重要性；2．就如何保护自己，谈谈你的看法(至少两点)。其次要确定时态，表示经常反复发生的动作，所以这篇文章要使用一般现在时。然后要确定文章的结构，文章开头简要说明近年来，中学生普遍缺乏自我保护意识这一现象，接着简要说明中学生自我保护的重要性，文章最后就如何保护自己给出建议。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。正确使用写信的格式，词数控制在一百左右。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。例如 ：.For one thing…For another thing…一方面……另一方面......学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。另外这篇短文还使用了一些高级句型。例如：For another thing，protecting ourselves contributes to the healthy development of the students，which is associated with the happiness of every family. 这里含有一个非限制性定语从句。