题目内容

5.良好的人际关系是建设和谐社会的关键.假设你是李华,最近你校对"中学生如何交友"?的话题展开讨论,大家发表了不同的看法.请你根据下面所给内容,写一封信给《21世纪高中生版》"Your Words"栏目,反映讨论情况.并说明你对如何交友看法.
为何交友建立良好的人际关系,构建和谐社会
交友对象学习上的朋友互帮互学,促进提高
生活上的朋友互助互利,摆脱困难
情感上的朋友倾诉烦恼,分享喜悦
如何交友(请考生联系自己拟定内容,列举两至三点)
注意:
1.不要简单翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯;
2.词数120左右.开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
3.参考词汇:人际关系interpersonal relationship.
Dear editor,
Recently our class have had a heated discussion on how middle school students should make friends.As we all know,….      .
Your ever,
Li Hua.

分析 题目要求根据所给提示写一封信,把"中学生如何交友?"这个话题的讨论情况反映给《21世纪报高中生版》"Your Words"栏目,并说明自己对如何交友的看法.写作要点包括:交友的原因;交友对象;如何交友等三方面;词数在150词左右,注意开头和结尾不计入总词数;不要出现标点和拼写错误,尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观;注意行文的连贯性.
亮点说明:范文涵盖了所有要点,进行了适当的拓展,并注意语句间的连贯性;范文还使用了宾语从句、定语从句、虚拟语气等语法知识,具备较强的语言运用能力.
语法方面:宾语从句①that they should make friends,②that they should have friends related to their life;定语从句①who are of great benefit to their studies,②who can listen to them attentively;让步状语从句whenever they have difficulty dealing with problems等,显示了较强的语法功底,也使作文句式变得多样;
短语和搭配方面:范文使用了play an important role in,rid of,bitterness and joy,when it comes to等,使作文的内容变得充实;
篇章结构方面:范文注意使用in addition,in my opinion,beside等来衔接句子和段落,使表达变得更有条理.

解答 Dear editor,
Recently our class have had a heated discussion on how middle school students should make friends.
As we all know,good interpersonal relationship plays an important role in building harmonious society.Many people suggest that they should make friends who are of great benefit to their studies,so they will help each other and make greater progress with their studies.(高分句型) Some believe that they should have friends related to their life,whenever they have difficulty dealing with problems in terms of life,they can help rid themselves of the problems.(高分句型)In addition,others agree that they should have some friends who can listen to them attentively and share their bitterness and joy.
When it comes to how to make friends,in my opinion,we students should treat each other honestly.(高分句型)Beside,similar character and common interest will also play an important part in making friends.
Yours ever,
Li Hua

点评 应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯,比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词,使文章流畅、通顺,并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感.(1)认真审题,确定体裁. (2)构思要点.根据题目要求,理解要表达的要点.设计好文章的层次段落,考虑所用时态、人称等,把要点串联起来,构成文章框架.(3)选词造句,避难选易.(4)认真检查,避免错误.仔细阅读全文,查找是否有错,注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误,句式是否正确.逻辑是否一致.

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