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10.假设你是李华.为了激发同学的英语学习兴趣,你和学校的几名同学在网上创立了一个英语学习网站enjoyenglish,com.请根据以下信息用英语在校报上写篇短文向同学介绍这个网站.
目的激发英事学习兴趣,使英语学习更加有趣轻松.
网站内容丰富的英语材料,如英文电影、外国文化、英语故事.
展示英语习作,交流英语学习经验.
注意:
1.词数不少于100
2.文章标题开头已给出,不计入总词数.
Dear fellow students,I'd like to introduce to you a new website-enjoyedglish.Com.

分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文,根据提示信息在校报上写篇短文向同学介绍网站enjoyenglish.com,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:分别从目的是激发英事学习兴趣,使英语学习更加有趣轻松和网站内容两个方面来讨论该话题 2、图表是文章的总体框架,要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:introduce sb.to sb.向某人介绍某人;set up 设立;a wide variety of…各种各样的…;surf this website 浏览这个网站;Besides另外;

解答 Dear fellows students,I'd like to introduce you to a new website-enjoyenglish.com.
    The purpose of setting up such a website is to develop your interest of learning English and make English learning easy and enjoyable for us students.(高分句型)A wide variety of English materials are available in this website,such as English movies,introduction to foreign cultures and short English stories.You can also enjoy chatting in English here with other English learners so that you can improve both your oral and written English.(高分句型) Besides,if you want to show your own English writing or share your learning experience,this website is your best choice.(高分句型)
    Welcome to surf this website and enjoy learning English!

点评 应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯,比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词,使文章流畅、通顺,并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感.(1)认真审题,确定体裁. (2)构思要点.根据题目要求,理解要表达的要点.设计好文章的层次段落,考虑所用时态、人称等,把要点串联起来,构成文章框架.(3)选词造句,避难选易.(4)认真检查,避免错误.仔细阅读全文,查找是否有错,注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误,句式是否正确.逻辑是否一致.

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