Question

【题目】假如你是李明，是景华中学一名高二学生。你发现部分同学每次遇到重要考试，都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信，向某学生英文报编辑反映该问题。信的内容应包括下列要点：

焦虑症状	建议
头晕、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等	1. 考前制订合适的复习计划。 2. 考试期间正常作息。 3. 睡前洗热水澡、 喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠。
	其他建议（内容由考生自己拟定）

注意：1．根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

2．词数：100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

3．参考词汇：头晕dizzy．

Dear editor，

I am Li Ming，a Senior Three student in Jinghua Middle School．I am writing to tell you

about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams．

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor，

I am Li Ming, a Senior three student in Jinghua Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams．

Most of us feel nervous whenever we are taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. (In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and) we are all eager to get rid of them．

First of all，we should study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams. Second, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore，during the period of exams， we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep. (In my opinion, it is important for us to have a right attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. ) Besides, we’d better go out for a walk or take some outdoor exercise before and after an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed (and then concentrate ourselves on exams. )

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：本文是写一封信，关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，本文的主题是部分同学每次遇到重要考试，都会出现一些焦虑症状这一现象，考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系。灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】学生写作要有灵活性，同时要表现出较好的英语语言表达能力。文章使用了很好的短语和句子：have terrible effects on 对...有很坏的影响；be eager to热切做某事； get rid of 摆脱；First of all首先； Second第二点； Therefore因此； Besides,还有； In my opinion在我看来； getting along with与...相处， concentrate on集中在某事； stay up 熬夜， Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite.是并列句，we’d better go out for a walk or take some outdoor exercise before and after an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed 是结果状语从句，They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results.句子很高级出色。