Question

【题目】书面表达

张红从广告上得知某公司需要一名秘书，于是她写信应聘。以下是张红的简历：

年龄：20岁，即将从职业学校毕业。

专业: 企业管理（business management）

经历：（1）学英语8年，会计算机；

（2）在过去三年中一直是本校学生报编辑之一，学习成绩在班上优秀;

（3）本人喜欢办公室工作，相信能胜任秘书工作。

请你以张红的名义向公司写信应聘。

参考词汇：职业学校 vocational school

专业 major

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir,

Through the ad, I know you need a secretary. I would like to have this job. Now let me introduce myself to you. My name is Zhang Hong. I am twenty and will soon graduate from a vocational school. My major is business management. I have been learning English for 8 years and I have computer experience. I have been one of the editors for the student newspaper in our school for the past three years. My grades remain upper level in my class. The most important thing is that I like office work very much. I am sure I can do it well. I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity. Thank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely yours,

Zhang Hong

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达为应用文，内容为求职信。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity使用了条件状语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量短语would like to, introduce…to…等短语，是文章更流畅。