Question

【题目】现在，越来越多的年轻人喜欢在网上点餐或打电话叫外卖，不愿意自己做饭，就这一现象结合下面的提示写一篇100词左右的短文。

1. 陈述现象；

2. 此现象的原因（至少2点）；

3. 你个人的看法和选择。

注意： 1．词数100左右；

2．行文连贯，语篇完整；

3．文中不得透露个人真实信息。

参考词汇：take-out restaurant 外卖店，外卖餐馆

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Answer 1

【答案】

Possible version

Nowadays, a growing number of young people would rather order food on the Internet or call a take-out restaurant for meals than cook at home.

It’s not surprising for them to do so. For one thing, with the pace of modern life becoming faster and faster, time is quite precious. In their eyes, it is unnecessary to take time to cook. For another thing, home cooking food is simpler in kind and less delicious, especially for those who are particular about food.

In my view, our health is closely related to what we eat. The busier we are, the more attention we should pay to food. Therefore, I prefer to cook food at home and go on a balanced diet.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类话题作文，要求对现在的年轻人喜欢在网上点餐或打电话叫外卖，不愿意自己做饭这一现象进行评论。提纲要点已给出，根据提纲，文章可分三段来写：第一段陈述现象，此段要简短；第二段分析原因，注意至少讲出两点；第三段谈自己的看法和选择。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：以一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。

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