题目内容
【题目】假设你是吴东,你在网上认识了一个美国朋友Jack,他来信向你诉说交朋友的烦恼,要求你就friendship这个话题发表你的观点和看法并给他一些建议。于是你根据你所了解的情况给他回了一封e-mail.
写作内容:
1.友谊是每个人生活中最重要的事情之一,没有朋友,人会孤独的;
2.多与朋友交流,让朋友知道你想与他交朋友以及你对朋友及友谊的理解;
3.真正的朋友应该同甘共苦;
4.邀请朋友参加一些活动如游泳、球赛等,赢得真正的友谊。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to have received your e-mail but I am sorry you are having some trouble in making friends.
In my opinion, friendship is one of the most important things in everyone’s life because without friends, we will suffer loneliness. If you would like to take my advice, you’ll win real friendship. First, why not communicate with your friend when possible, tell him/her what you think about friends and friendship, and let him/her know that you want to make friends with him/her. Secondly, you should learn to share your happiness and sorrow with your friends. Thirdly, it would be a good idea you like to invite him/her to join in some activities, such as swimming and ball games, which can make you learn to appreciate your friends and cherish your friendship.
I hope you will find these opinions and ideas useful.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wu Dong
【解析】本文属于提纲类作文,要求就friendship这个话题发表你的观点和看法并给你的网友一些建议,根据你所了解的情况给他回了一封e-mail。要注意书信的格式和特殊用词。考虑用用一般现在时来写。要点:1.友谊是每个人生活中最重要的事情之一,没有朋友,人会孤独的;2.多与朋友交流,让朋友知道你想与他交朋友以及你对朋友及友谊的理解;3.真正的朋友应该同甘共苦;4.邀请朋友参加一些活动如游泳、球赛等,赢得真正的友谊。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语,为文章增色不少,如: take my advice 采纳某人的建议,make friends with与某人……交朋友。还使用了条件状语从句If you would like to take my advice, you’ll win real friendship.和定语从句Thirdly, it would be a good idea you like to invite him/her to join in some activities, such as swimming and ball games, which can make you learn to appreciate your friends and cherish your friendship.等多种句式结构,增加了文章的可读性。