题目内容
【题目】短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Editor,
I’m a senior high student. Now many students use mobile phones frequent .They think it’s a fashion to use mobile phones .Beside , it’s very convenient to get in the touch with their families and friend by using mobile phones. And some students break the rules in class. They bring their mobile phones to the classroom and we often hear the ring of mobile phones in class. Some of them even waste precious time in class typed short messages on the mobile phones .
In my opinions ,the classroom is a place which students gain knowledge . So those with mobile phones shouldn’t bring mobile phones to the classroom . We are supposed to concentrate on our studies. The teachers should do what they can forbid the students to use mobile phones in the classroom.
Yours ,
Wang Li
【答案】
Dear Editor,
I’m a senior high student. Now many students use mobile phones frequent .They think it’s a fashion to
frequently
use mobile phones .Beside , it’s very convenient to get in the \ touch with their families and friend by
Besides friends
using mobile phones. And some students break the rules in class. They bring their mobile phones to the
But
classroom and we often hear the ring of mobile phones in class. Some of them even waste precious time in class typed short messages on the mobile phones .
typing
In my opinions ,the classroom is a place which students gain knowledge . So those with mobile phones
opinion where
shouldn’t bring mobile phones to the classroom . We are supposed to concentrate in our studies. The teachers
on
should do what they can∧ forbid the students to use mobile phones in the classroom.
to Yours ,
Wang Li
【1】第二句 frequent--- frequently。
【2】第四句Beside--- Besides。
【3】第四句 把get in the touch with中的the 去掉。
【4】第四句friend --- friends。
【5】第五句 And ---But。
【6】第七句 typed---typing。
【7】第八句 opinions---opinion。
【8】第八句 which---where。
【9】第十句 in---on。
【10】最后一句 在can后加to。
【解析】
【1】第二句 frequent--- frequently 考查副词的用法。修饰动词用副词。故把frequent改为frequently
【2】第四句Beside--- Besides; 考查副词的用法。Beside,在旁边;Besides而且。故把Beside改为Besides
【3】第四句 把get in the touch with中的the 去掉。考查冠词的用法。这里get in touch with是个固定短语,表示“与。。。取得联系”。故去掉the
【4】第四句friend --- friends 考查名词的用法。应用friend的复数和前面并列,而且代词是their,故把friend 改为friends。
【5】第五句 And ---But。考察连词的用法。此处为转折关系。故把And 改为But。
【6】第七句 typed---typing。考查非谓语的用法。waste time doing sth 固定搭配。故把typed改为typing
【7】第八句 opinions---opinion。考查名词的用法。in one’s opinion固定搭配。故把opinions改为opinion
【8
【9】第十句 in---on。考查介词的用法。concentrate on固定短语。故把in改为on。
【10】最后一句 在can后加to。考查非谓语的用法。目的状语用to do。故在动词forbid 之前添加to。