Question

【题目】假定你是李华，请你以初三毕业生的身份给学弟学妹们写一封电子邮件。

要求如下：1、包含以下所有信息：

①What problem did you have with your schoolwork?

②Who did you talk to about the problem?

③What advice did you get?

④How did you deal with the problem?

⑤What’s your plan for your future?

2、重点分享你在处理学习困难方面的经验以及你下一步学习或生活的打算；

3、邮件不少于80词，开头与结尾已给出，不计入字数；

4、不得出现真实的个人信息。

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Answer 1

【答案】例文

Dear friends,

How time flies! I'll graduate from Junior high school soon. I still remember that I did badly in exams for a long time because of basketball. I loved basketball very much. At that time, I played it with my classmates every day for a few hours. I had little time to study. Then I talked to my headteacher Mr. Hu. He advised me to spend less time in playing basketball every day. I tried my best to spend more time in doing homework. I found I succeeded in mastering knowledge, and I have a great sense of success. Therefore, I paid more attention to my study and made a great progress. I plan to go to a good Senior High school, So I am ready to work harder.

Yours,

Tom

【解析】

1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文，也是书信作文，注意格式。本文时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时。字数80词以上。认真阅读材料，认真审题。提出有用信息：①What problem did you have with your schoolwork?②Who did you talk to about the problem?③What advice did you get?④How did you deal with the problem?⑤What’s your plan for your future?注意语法和单词拼写，表达条理清楚连贯，语言流畅。