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【题目】David 最近特别苦恼。他的学习成绩退步很多，因为他渐渐迷恋上电脑游戏，经常背着父母消耗时间到深夜，白天有空就上网，父母知道了很生气，而他还与父母发生争吵。David写信给朋友Lily，让Lily帮他解决这个问题。请你以Lily的名义给他提供一些建议，要点如下：1、 不要玩游戏，游戏对眼睛不好，对学习有坏处。（play, bad）2、 多参加体育运动, 周末多和同学一起活动。（play sports, play with）3、 学会和朋友父母沟通，和父母亲多交流，向父母道歉。（talk with, say sorry）4、 努力学习，争取取得好的成绩。(work hard, grades)要求：1、可以对要点进行适当补充。2、100词左右，开头已写出，但不记入总词数。
Dear David,
I know you are not happy these days, you did badly in your study.……
Best wishes!
Yours
Lily

Answer 1

【答案】Dear David,

I know you are not happy these days, you did badly in your study. You loved playing computer games so much that you couldn't stop playing them until very late at night. It's very normal for your parents to angry with you. You shouldn't argue with them about it. So I will give you some suggestions. First, don't computer games, because it is bad for your eyes, it's also bad for study. Second, play sports often, you can play with your classmates on the weekend. Third, learn to communicate with your parents and friends. You should often talk with your parents, tell them you are wrong and say sorry to them. Fourth, work hard, forget past, you will get good grades.

Best wishes!

Yours

Lily

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第二人称，以祈使句式为主。注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。