题目内容
【题目】中国的传统新年即将到来,请你根据下面的要求写三个不同的新年愿望。
要求:
1.词数70左右,文章已给内容不计入总词数。
2.每个新年愿望中,你都要写出你将做什么和原因。
3.文章中不得出现你的学校名称和你的真实姓名。
My first resolution is about improving my physical health.
My second resolution is about improving my relationships with my family.
My last resolution is about
【答案】My first resolution is about improving my physical health. I am going to try a new sport such as ping-pong. Playing more sports will help me to become healthier and I will not fall ill so often.
My second resolution is about improving my relationships with my family. I’m going to spend more time with my family. Maybe we can take up a new hobby together; Doing more things together will make us happy.
My last resolution is about how to do better at school, I am going to read more books in English. It is going to help me learn more English words.
【解析】这篇作文要求我们写三个新年愿望,每个愿望中,你要说清楚你将要做什么以及原因。这篇作文是开放式的,题目中并没有给我们规定要写的具体内容,只给我们出了主题,具体的新年愿望是什么,需要学生们自己发挥想象力,组织语言,充实文章的内容,这对于学生们来说是一个写作的难点。通过分析可知,这篇短文需要描写的是未来的打算,因此文章应使用一般将来时态,be going to 结构或者will加上动词原形。写作时,应注意英语表达和汉语的习惯不同,不要写汉语式的英语。多使用简单句和并列句,辅以复合句,如时间状语从句、宾语从句、原因状语从句等,这样可以使文章更加连贯。使用自己积累的短语和句型,句子之间使用一些过渡性的词汇或短语,使文章表达流畅。