Question

【题目】书面表达

“谁知盘中餐，粒粒皆辛苦。”然而有不少同学在学校就餐时存在不同程度的浪费食物的现象。对此请你根据下面的思维导图要点提示，以“Don’t Waste Any More”为题写一篇英语短文，呼吁大家节约粮食，防止浪费

Don’t Waste Any More

1. Food is important to us

2.Waste much food. For example...

3.Lots of people are short of food in the world, die of hunger

4.Have a good habit

提示： 1. 内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥；

2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；

3. 词数不少于80。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Don’t Waste Any More!

Food is very important to us. It’s everybody’s duty to save food.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Don’t Waste Any More!

Food is important to us. It’s everyone’s duty to save food. But at school not everyone can realize this. Many students waste much food. For example, some students buy more food than they need. They leave much on the plate and then pour it into the rubbish can. Some students even throw the food everywhere for fun. Our country is a developing county. In order to make Chinese dream come true, we should save everything as well as the food in our life. What’s more, lots of people are short of food in the world. They live a hard life and many of them, especially some children, die of hunger. We should have a good habit. Let’s take an active part together!

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求以Don’t waste any more为标题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，呼吁大家节约粮食，防止浪费。所给要点比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：亮点一：In order to make Chinese dream come true, we should save everything as well as the food in our life. 为了实现中国的梦想，我们要节约一切以及我们生活中的食物。亮点二：What’s more, lots of people are short of food in the world. 更重要的是，世界上许多人缺乏食物。