题目内容
【题目】书面表达
我校决定组织以“I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals”为题的英语演讲比赛。请你以Amy的名义写一篇英语演讲稿推荐自己,内容如下:
品质 | 善良,照看无家可归的猫和狗 大方,常捐款给当地慈善机构 |
事迹 | 组织慈善义演,为WWF筹款 分发传单呼吁人们保护动物 |
感悟 | 我们应该和动物交朋友 保护动物很重要 |
打算 | ……(至少两点) |
要求:
1.词数90个左右,演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2.所写短文必须包括以上内容,自由发挥的内容必须围绕主题。
I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals
Hello everyone. I'm Amy. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. I'm glad to make a speech here.
Thanks for listening!
【答案】I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals
Hello everyone. I'm Amy. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. I'm glad to make a speech here. I am kind to others. I like looking after homeless animals. I am generous and often donate my money to the local charities. I have ever organized a charity show to raise money for WWF. What’s more, I hand out leaflets to ask people to protect animals.
We should make friends with animals. I think protecting animals is protecting ourselves, so it is important for everyone to protect them.
If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals. I will call on more people to love animals like me. I must try my best to make the world more beautiful.
Thanks for listening!
【解析】亮点说明:这篇习作的层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语,例如be a volunteer,be glad to do,make a speech,be kind to others,like doing,look after,raise money,make friends with,hand out,ask sb. to do,what's more,call on,try my best等。而I think protecting animals is protecting ourselves, so it is important for everyone to protect them./ If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals.等多种复杂从句结构和特殊句式it is important for everyone to protect them.的运用,丰富了习作内容,使表达多样,是本文的最大亮点。