Question

【题目】（题文）根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容，描述一下Mr. and Ms. Green家里发生了什么。

参考词汇：burglar n. 窃贼 steal (stole, stolen) v. 偷

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Answer 1

【答案】【参考范文】

One night, Mr. and Ms. Green were sleeping. So was their cat. The cat dreamed of a fish. At that moment, a burglar came into their room quietly from the window. He wanted to steal something from their house. The cat woke up. He fought with the burglar bravely. Being afraid to wake up the Greens, the burglar had to escape from the window again. The brave cat protected the things from being stolen without waking up its owner.

【解析】试题分析：1）弄清图画内容，把握情节线索，根据图画在脑海中串联出完整的故事，注意图画中的细节。

（2）结合提示词，明确考查意图。根据提示，选择正确的时态，运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型，作适当展开，联想，就能比较完整地表达出画面的意思了。

（3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯。

（4）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用。

（5）注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致，句子的语序和表达是否符合英文习惯等，尽量减少错误。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的作文。时态运用正确，内容要点完整、应用词汇灵活准确，句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，上下文连贯，字数符合要求。