Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你是刘宇，今天你们在街上做了一次关于“最美味的水果”的问卷调查并绘制了以下图表。请根据图表内容写一篇80词左右的作文，向大家汇报一下调查结果。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Today we did a survey about “Nicest Fruit” on the street. ________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Today we did a survey about “Nicest Fruit” on the street. About 145 people took part in it. 35 people think the apple is the nicest fruit. When it comes to the orange and the banana, the numbers of people fall to 30 and 10. However, about the kiwifruit and the blueberry, the numbers of people are 25 and 40. The last one is the grape. Only five people like it.

Now we can see that the most people like the blueberry but the fewest people like the grape among these people.

【解析】

这篇作文要求我们根据图表来介绍调查结果，首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意表达的层次和条理。其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，谓语动词用原形，特别要注意如果主语是第三人称单数的时候，谓语动词形式要变化，这是一个写作的难点。最后要注意英语的表达习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达，语法规范。还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语，增强文章的表现力。