Question

【题目】书面表达

新的一年马上就要开始了，王璐写了一份新年计划。请根据表格中的信息，以第一人称的形式完成王璐的新年计划。80个单词左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】New Year's Resolutions

New Year is coming, so I make some New Year's resolutions.

First, I want to learn to play an instrument because I like music very much. I'm going to practice it every day. Next, I want to get a lot of exercise to keep fit. I'm going to run every morning. Then, I want to improve my English because I want to get good grades. I'm going to read English books and write diaries in English. Finally, I want to be a school magazine's reporter because I like talking with people. I'm going to write articles.

I think I am able to keep them and I hope I am going to improve my life.

【解析】

本文要求根据表格中的信息，以第一人称的形式完成王璐的新年计划。写作中会运用want to do sth.和be going to结构。使用“WWH法”写计划和愿望：what: learn to play an instrument, get a lot of exercise, improve English, be a school magazine's reporter; why: like music very much, to keep fit, to get good grades, like talking with people; how：第3、5、7、9句。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，条理清晰，语句通顺。

添彩点：作者将表格中提供的信息用“First, Next, Then, Finally”连在一起，使文章清晰。文中“so”的应用使句与句更好地连接。另外，文中用“because”处理表格中“Why”的回答，使句子更加连贯。