Question

【题目】书面表达

我们学校和江阴广电公众号“最江阴”将在11月份开展“菁园最美少年”的评选活动。班主任老师要求大家积极推选，你打算推荐你们班的David参加本次活动的评选，请用英文写信向你的班主任吴老师介绍一下David的情况。内容要点如下：

1. 积极活泼，乐意接受挑战；

2. 爱好画画，作品曾获高度赞誉；

3. 擅长运动，刚参加校足球队选拔；

4. 充满爱心，常做很多自愿者工作；

5. 对他影响最深的人是他父亲，因为……。

注意事项：

1. 介绍须包括所有内容要点，语句通顺，意思连贯，符合逻辑。

2. 第五要点用2-3句话补充完整，内容正确，符合题意。

3. 词数90左右，信的开头和结尾不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. Wu,

I would like to recommend David as “Nicest Student” in our school.

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We hope that you agree with me.

Yours sincerely,

Wang Tao

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Wu,

I would like to recommend David as “Nicest Student” in our school.

He is active and lively, and he is willing to accept the challenge. He loves to draw. His works have been highly praised. He is good at sports.He has just joined the school football team. He is full of love.He often does a lot of volunteer work. The man who has the most influence on him is his father, because his father is always ready to help others.

We hope that you agree with me.

Yours sincerely,

Wang Tao

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如The man who has the most influence on him is his father, because his father is always ready to help others.

等等。