Question

【题目】写作

最近，你班就“Your Ideal Job”展开了一次调查。下表是你们小组的情况， 请根据表格内容写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。

组员	个性	理想职业	原因
Millie	有耐心	青少年辅导员	喜欢帮助青少年解决压力问题，并给予他们有价值的建议
Kate	细心	医生	1.(自拟一点内容) 2. 喜欢研究颜色，想用颜色改变人们的不好情绪
Daniel	乐于助人	志愿者	1.(自拟一点内容) 2. 愿意为血癌病人献造血干细胞。
你	有创造力	工程师	(自拟两点内容)

注意：1. 词数100左右(短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。

Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. Here’s a report about my group members’ ideas

Answer 1

【答案】

Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. Here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.

Millie is patient.She wants to be a junior counselor because she likes helping the teengers with their pressure and she can give them helpful suggestions. Kate is careful.She wants to be a doctor.She thinks doctors’ job is very great.She likes helping the sick people. She likes to study the color, and she wants to use colors to change people's bad mood. Daniel is happy to help others.He would like to be a volunteer. He likes the volunteers’job.He is willing to offer the hematopoietic stem cells in leukemia patients. I am creative.I would like to be an engineer. I like to design things for people.I think engineers’ job is interesting.

Hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如She wants to be a junior counselor because she likes helping the teengers with their pressure and she can give them helpful suggestions.等等。