题目内容
【题目】人生如旅。在你的成长过程中,许多人感动着你也影响着你,如:父母、老师、朋友、故事中的人……假设最近你们市正举行以"The person who has influenced me most"为话题的中学生英语征文活动,Spud Webb深深地影响着你,请根据表格中的内容要点完成征文。
Spud Webb |
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基本情况 | 1. 个头矮小,梦想进入NBA 2. 一直为梦想而奋斗 3. 1985年成为NBA球员 |
成功原因 | 1. …… 2. …… |
对我的影响 | …… |
要求:1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥;
3. 词数:100词左右(正文的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
The person who has influenced me most is Spud Webb.
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【答案】【参考范文】
The person who has influenced me most is Spud Webb.
Spud Webb was born in 1963 in the USA. He was short then, but he had a big dream — to play basketball in the NBA. He was fighting for his dream since his childhood. As a saying goes,"Where there is a will, there is a way. " In 1985, he became an NBA player.
What led Spud Webb to success? First, he didn't lose heart or give up even when he was refused to play basketball in the team because of his height. Second, he was able to take every chance.
Spud Webb has influenced me a lot. When I face difficulty in my daily life, his spirit keeps me going and encourages me to take on new challenges.
【解析】这是一篇图表,根据图表内容介绍影响自己的人Spud Webb。动笔前先要认真阅读要点,围绕要点组织材料,然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第三人称,注意正确的时态,谓语动词的正确形式,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。