题目内容
14.请以I Have Changed!为题写一篇作文,看看自己现在和过去有什么变化,请从外貌、性格、爱好来说明.词数:80~100左右.要求:1、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;2、内容切题、有条理、层次清楚;
3、文中不得使用你的真实姓名、班级等.
I Have Changed!
My life has changed a lot in the past two years.Especially with the growth of my knowledge,I have greatly changed.I can well remember that I used to be short,but now I am one of the tallest in my class and to my joy,I have be chosen to be on the school team.Besides,what interested most in the past was playing computer games,but now I realize it is a waste of time.Reading is my favorite hobby.Another change is that now I like vegetables and fruit much better than junk food.So you see,I am much healthier than before.All in all,I am happy with these changes because they have brought me the happiness of growth..
分析 高分句型一
but now I realize it is a waste of time.但现在我意识到这是在浪费时间.这是一个宾语从句,I realize 是主句,it is a waste of time是从句.
高分句型二
Reading is my favorite hobby.阅读是我最喜欢的爱好.这是动名词做主语,注意后面的谓语动词用单数.
解答 I Have Changed!
My life has changed a lot in the past three years.【开头点明主题】Especially with the growth of my knowledge,I have greatly changed.I can well remember that I used to be short,but now I am one of the tallest in my class and to my joy,I have be chosen to be on the school team.Besides,what interested most in the past was playing computer games,but now I realize it is a waste of time.【高分句型一,注意宾语从句的使用】Reading is my favorite hobby【高分句型二,注意动名词的使用】.Another change is that now I like vegetables and fruit much better than junk food.So you see,I am much healthier than before.【正文部分介绍自己的变化】All in all,I am happy with these changes because they have brought me the happiness of growth.【结尾部分紧扣主题】
点评 动笔前应先认真阅读材料,围绕所给材料组织内容,确定主要短语,句式等问题.注意不要遗漏要点,句子要通顺连贯,没有语法错误.
| A. | regret | B. | regard | C. | reply | D. | require |
| interest,well,among,they,eat,of,act,on,watch,lazy |