Question

2．假如你是某中学的一名学生．6月3日，是星期五，在放学回家的公交车上，你所经历的一件事让你印象深刻．请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇日记．
要点：
1．一位老爷爷和十来岁的孙子上了车，老人拿着书包和小提琴；
2．你给老人让座，老人的孙子却坐了下来，老人只得站在旁边；
3．孩子大声喊着向老人要水喝，并将空水瓶扔到车上．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
On my way home on the bus，I saw an old man get on with his grandson of about ten我回家的路上，在公交车上，看见一个老人和他十来岁的孙子一起上车了．
on one's way to+地点：去某地的路上，home是副词，省略了to．
【高分句型二】
I think①the boy should ②not only respect and take care of the old man but also keep the environment clean我认为男孩不仅仅应该尊重和照顾老人也要保护环境．
①think后是省略that的宾语从句．
②not only…but also…不仅…而且…

解答 June3，Friday                                                             Fine
On my way home on the bus，I saw an old man get on with his grandson of about ten．【高分句型一】He was carrying the boy's schoolbag and violin．（一位老爷爷和十来岁的孙子上了车，老人拿着书包和小提琴）I gave my seat to the old man at once．However，the boy sat down first．The old man had to stand nearby．（你给老人让座，老人的孙子却坐了下来，老人只得站在旁边；）After a while，the boy shouted to his grandpa for water and then dropped the empty bottle on the bus．（孩子大声喊着向老人要水喝，并将空水瓶扔到车上）
When I saw this，I got very angry．I think the boy should not only respect and take care of the old man but also keep the environment clean．【高分句型二】（我的看法）

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．