Question

【题目】书面表达（满分15分）

三年的初中学习生活即将结束，你的父母亲一路艰辛，在学习和生活上给予你关怀、鼓励、支持与帮助，你心存感激。假如你的名字叫谢恩，请你给你的父母亲写一封感谢信，谈谈你对他们的印象，回忆他们是怎么帮助你的，并表达你对他们的祝福。

提示词： kind, help, encourage, thanks, hope.

注意：1. 格式要完整、正确；词数：60~80；书写日期不限。

2. 考生可以根据情节需要适当发挥；文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。

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Answer 1

【答案】

June 26

Dear father and mother,

I’m glad to write to you.You are such kind and responsible parents that I love you very much. Owing to your help, I finished my primary study three years ago, now I will finish my junior middle school. I remember when I was I primary school I hated going to school, and I even made much trouble at school. When you noticed this, you had a talk with me. You told me again and again the importance of the study and encouraged me never give up. I’ve made great progress in my study step by step and now I’m the top student in junior three.
I want to say thanks. I will work harder and be a useful person in the future. I hope you can be happy and healthy forever.

Yours,

Xie En

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求给父母亲写一封感谢信，要注意书信的基本格式。短文要从“对父母的印象”、“父母是怎么帮助的”、“对父母的祝福”三个方面来进行写作。对父母的印象用一般现在时态；父母是怎么帮助的，是短文的重点，要较为详细地表达，用一般过去时态或一般现在时态；对父母的祝福，要情真意切，要注意语言的选择和句法的运用。

写作亮点：本感谢信格式正确，叙述清楚，层次分明。简短的开头后，即回忆父母是如何帮助我从厌学到成为一名尖子生的过程，生动具体，重点突出。其中的such…that…，分词作状语、宾语从句、时间状语从句等等用得很好；最后一段三句话，三个方面：感谢、梦想、祝愿。简捷精炼，主题鲜明。