Question

【题目】你一定有过一次难忘的旅游经历，它也一定给你留下了美好的回忆，请以”My Favorite Trip”为题，向你的同学介绍一下那里的天气、饮食、风景、民俗等，使同学们以后度假是有更多的选择。

要求：语句通顺，篇章结构完整，60词左右。

My Favorite Trip

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Answer 1

【答案】My Favorite Trip

My parents and I went to the countryside last Saturday morning. It was sunny.I was very excited. We visited the farm and walked around the countryside in the morning. We fed the animals and my father took the pictures of us. At noon, we had a picnic on the ground near the river. So my mother cooked some food, like sandwiches,hamburgers and salad before we came here . After that we played some games on the ground. But people here like rice.Then we went fishing. I enjoyed fishing!

I will never forget this exciting trip. I hope that we will have a good time.

【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以“My Favorite Trip”为题，结合本题所给的写作信息，阐述自己一次难忘的旅游经历。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般过去时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中 last Saturday morning，walked around， at noon， had a picnic，after that , and，so, then等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文章的最后I hope that we will have a good time.表达了自己愿望与想法，使文章增色不少，值得学习。