Question

【题目】假如你是Lisa，到学校后发现你的英语书，钢笔以及一串钥匙忘在了家里。 需要写张便条给妹妹Amy，让她帮你带到学校来（英语书是蓝色的，在书桌上； 钢笔是黑色的，在抽屉里； 钥匙可能在梳妆台上）。要求字数不少于40词。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Amy,

I leave my English book, a pen and a set of keys at home. Please bring these things to me when you come to school. My English book is blue, it is on my desk. The pen is black and it’s in the drawer. And maybe the keys are on the dresser.

Thanks,

Lisa

【解析】【亮点说明】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如at home，bring these things to me，come to school，on my desk，in the drawer，on the dresser等。而I leave my English book, a pen and a set of keys at home./ Please bring these things to me when you come to school./ And maybe the keys are on the dresser.等多种句式的运用更是为文章增色不少。