Question

【题目】书面表达(15分)

假设你是Lucy，你将去某城市旅游。你从网上获得了Sunshine Hotel的部分信息。请你写一封电子邮件给该宾馆的经理，介绍你的行程并咨询如下相关细节：

1. How far is the hotel from the airport?

2. How can you get to the hotel?

3. Do they offer free breakfast?

4. Is there a discount(折扣) for a long stay?

要求：

1. 覆盖要点，请补充合理的细节；

2. 语句通顺，书写工整；

3. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir,

My family is planning a holiday to your city. I got some information about your hotel, but I still have some questions to ask. Would you be kind enough to reply to my e-mail?

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir,

My family is planning a holiday to your city. I got some information about your hotel, but I still have some questions to ask. Would you be kind enough to reply to my e-mail?

We are arriving in your city on October 1st. And we plan to stay in your hotel for 5 days. Would you tell me how far your hotel is from the airport? And we’d like to know how we can get to your hotel. Also, we wonder whether you offer free breakfast. Last but not least, would you mind telling us whether there is a discount for a long stay?

Thanks for your time. I’m looking forward to your reply.

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇材料作文。在要点中给出了写作的大致方向，结合要点展开即可。根据要求可知写作主要内容是以电子邮件的形式介绍行程并咨询相关信息。所以时态主要是一般将来时。写作中，注意电子邮件的格式，咨询的语气。注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

【亮点说明】这篇短文内容涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，使文章脉络清晰、自然流畅。同时，使用了一些常用的句式和短语，如：plan to do、Would you tell me ---、we’d like to know ---、we wonder whether ---、would you mind---、 look forward to等，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累，掌握一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。