Question

17．为弘扬感恩这一中华传统美德，你校英语社团决定举办以"Be grateful tomy English teacher"为题的征文活动．请参考以下提示，结合你的经历和感受，写一篇英语征文稿．
提示：

参考词汇：grateful 感激的，encourage，support
要求：1．将题目补充完整；
2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3．词数80左右．
Be grateful tomy English teacher
I really want to express thanks to my English teacher，Miss Wang!
She's so smart and fair and friendly．She's got big eyes and long dark hair．I enjoy her each lesson every day．
With her kindness，she gets my attention．Every day she's planting a seed，helping all of us．I still remember the day when I had a low mark in English，I hid away from all my classmates because I was shy and afraid to be laughed at．Miss Wang noticed that and spent her whole afternoon helping with my test questions and my worries．
She's a teacher like spring who encourages and leads us to a bright future．I'll write a poem for her to show all my thanks．I'll let everyone know she's great and I'm grateful to have her as my teacher．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I still remember the day①when I had a low mark in English，I hid away from all my classmates②because I was shy and③afraid to be laughed at．我仍然记得我英语分数低的那天，我将自己藏起来没因为我害羞害怕被嘲笑．
①when作为关系词的定语从句，修饰前面的the day．
②because引导的原因状语从句．
③be afraid to do sth 害怕做某事．
【高分句型二】
She's a teacher like spring who encourages and leads us to a bright future．她是一名老师，像春天一样，鼓励我带领我走向美好的未来．
who作为关系词的定语从句，修饰前面的teacher

解答 Be grateful to my English teacher
I really want to express thanks to my English teacher，Miss Wang!（感谢谁）
She's so smart and fair and friendly．She's got big eyes and long dark hair．（形象）I enjoy her each lesson every day．
With her kindness，she gets my attention．Every day she's planting a seed，helping all of us．I still remember the day  when I had a low mark in English，I hid away from all my classmates because I was shy and afraid to be laughed at．【高分句型一】Miss Wang noticed that and spent her whole afternoon helping with my test questions and my worries．（如何帮助我的，为什么要感谢）
She's a teacher like spring who encourages and leads us to a bright future【高分句型二】．I'll write a poem for her to show all my thanks．I'll let everyone know she's great and I'm grateful to have her as my teacher．（感受和如何表示谢意）

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．