题目内容
假设你是一名中学生,名叫田梅。你从南京青奥会英文网站上获悉他们正在招收志愿者,你想给组委会写一封英文自荐信。内容提示见下表:
基本信息 | 新城中学九年级学生,16岁 |
个人品质 | 精力充沛,随和,有耐心 |
主要特长 | 英语说得好,擅长与他人合作 |
相关经历 | 今年4月,成为“2014无锡国际马拉松赛”志愿者,…… |
注意事项:
1.自荐信须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2.“相关经历”一栏中省略部分须用2-3句话展开合理想象,作适当发挥;
3.词数在80个左右,信的首尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总次数;
4.信件内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
参考词汇:
新城中学(New Town Middle School)
志愿者工作(voluntary work)
2014无锡国际马拉松赛(the 2014 Wuxi International Marathon)
Dear sir/madam:
I have visited your English website and have learned that volunteers are wanted. My name is Tian Mei a Grade Nine student from New Middle School .I an sixteen years old.I am energetic,outgoing and patient.I speak English well and good at working with others.In April this year,I became a volunteer for the 2014 Wuxi International Marathon I worked hard and did well.I am sure I am a good volunteer of the 2nd Summer Youth Olympic Games. I look forward to hearing from you.
【解析】
试题分析:因为这是一封自荐信,所以句子的主语应该是第一人称,在介绍自己的品质及爱好方面因为这是平时的情况,所以应该用一般现在时。今年4月,成为“2014无锡国际马拉松赛”志愿者,在叙述这个要点时应该用过去式,最后向组委会提出自己的想当自愿者的要求。上下文句子要连贯流畅。
【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式,增加了文章的色彩,如:I speak English well and good at working with others. I became a volunteer for the 2014 Wuxi International Marathon I worked hard and did well. I am sure I am a good volunteer of the 2nd Summer Youth Olympic Games.等。短文用了连词that引导的宾语从句,增加文章的亮点。
考点:提纲作文。