Question

【题目】 文段表达 (15分)

根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。信的开头和 结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的 校名和姓名。

假设你叫李华，最近和英国朋友Jim通过邮件谈论各自的梦想，他想了解你的职业梦想。请根据他的问题回复邮件。

提示词语: want to be, reason, think, work hard

To Jim From Li Hua Subject My dream Hi! Jim, I’m glad to hear from you.______________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Everyone has his own dream. I want to be a good doctor. The reason is that some doctors saved my life after I was badly hurt in a traffic accident. I was deeply moved by their medical skills. From then on, to be a doctor in the future has always been my dream.

Everyone can realize his dream. I think the first thing I will do is to remember what my dream is. I won’t let it leave my mind. I will also keep telling myself what I want every day. What’s more, I will never give up. Though there may be difficulties on the road to my dream, I will always feel confident and work hard.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。