Question

19．假设你叫王磊．目前，我市正在开展创建"文明卫生城市"，学校也提出了"垃圾不落地，校园更美丽"的口号，为了积极响应学校号召，上周你和几位同学到火车站进行志愿者活动，贡献自己的一份力量．请把你所做的事写一封电子邮件告诉你的好朋友Bob．

Place	Train station
Time	From 8：00 to 12：00 on Saturday morning
People	You and some classmates
Aclivitics	Clean the-benches．pick up the mbbish，sweep the ground
Feeling	A little tired but happy

要求：
1.80词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．文章尽可能包括表格中所有信息，语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁；
3．文中不得使用你的真实姓名及校名．
Bob，
I'm writing to tell you about a voluntary activity last week．
                                 
Wang Lei．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
My classmates and I decided to do something to make it cleaner and  tidier我的同学和我决定去做一些事情让火车站更干净整洁．
to make it cleaner and  tidier动词不定式做目的状语．
【高分句型二】
I hope ①everyone will ②make a contribution to improving the environment of our city我希望每个人都能为改善城市的环境做贡献．
①hope后是省略that的宾语从句．
②make a contribution to doing sth为…做贡献

解答 Bob，
        I'm writing to tell you about a voluntary activity last week．We got to the train station at 8 o'clock on Saturday morning．My classmates and I decided to do something to make it cleaner and  tidier．【高分句型一】（地点时间人物）First，we cleaned the benches，and then we picked up the rubbish and advised others not to throw rubbish here and there．At noon，we swept the ground together and then we left．（活动）We were a little tired after long hours of hard work，but we were still very happy．I hope everyone will make a contribution to improving the environment of our city．【高分句型二】（感受）
       Hope to write soon．Best wishes!
Yours，
Wang Lei

点评 做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句．最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误．