Question

7．上周，你班同学王磊骑电动车匆忙过马路时被一辆急驶的出租车撞倒，司机逃跑了，王磊只有自救．幸运的是，他伤势不重，右腿骨折，但是受了惊吓．为此你班开了有关交通安全方面的主题班会，让王磊就亲身经历现身说法，同学们就如何减少交通事故和万一遇到交通事故应如何自救等问题展开了讨论，假如你是王磊，请以How can We save ourselves？为题写一篇短文，要点如下：

事故	1．上学路上你骑电动车被出租车撞倒，司机逃跑了…
	2．伤势不重，右腿骨折
措施	1．保持镇静，打电话求助
	2．保留现场
教训	1．遵守交通规则
	2．过马路要推车慢行…
	3．…

要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右；
4）不得使用真实姓名和校名等．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I also kept the scene so that the policemen can find out the information as quickly as possible．
句中"so that the policemen can find out the information as quickly as possible"为目的状语从句．句中短语有"find out  查明，发现"、"as…as possible  尽可能地…"．这句话意为：我也保护了现场以便于警察可以尽快地查明真相．
高分句型二：
In short，everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger．
句中使用短语有："in short 总而言之"、"need to do sth 需要做某事"、"stay away from…远离…"．这句话意为：总而言之，每个人都需要学习怎么保护自己，远离危险．

解答 How Can We Protect Ourselves
Last week，I was knocked down by a taxi when I rode to school．After that，the driver ran away．Luckily，I wasn't badly hurt．My right leg was hurt．At first，I was afraid．But I kept calm after a while，then I called for help．I also kept the scene so that the policemen can find out the information as quickly as possible．【高分句型一】（讲述事故）
The accident gave me a lesson that self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers．But how can we protect ourselves？Here are some suggestions．（总结教训）
First，we should obey the traffic rules．Also，we should be careful when we cross the road．Second，if we are in danger，we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep us safe．In short，everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger．【高分句型二】（提出建议）

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．