题目内容

12.提示:
1.长大后,我要当一名…
2.好处:如果我当了一名…,我就会出名.如果我出名(be famous)了,我就会有很多钱.如果我有很多钱,我就会帮助到很多人,可以周游全世界,可以…
3.问题:如果我当了一名…,我就会很累.如果我出名了,就很难找到真正的朋友…

My dream job
Everyone has a dream,so do I.My dream job is to be a reporter.If I become a famous reporter,I will be famous and I will make lots of money.I will be rich.I can do lots of things.For example,I will be able to travel around the world.I will buy a big house for my parents and a car for myself.But if I am famous,I may have lots of trouble,my people will watch me all the time and they will follow me here and there,I can't do everything I like to do and also it will be hard for me to realize who my really friends are,maybe I won't be as happy as it it now.Do you think so?.

分析 【高分句型一】
If I become a famous reporter,I will be famous and I will make lots of money如果我成为一名著名的记者,我会很有名会赚很多钱.
if引导的条件状语从句,遵循主将从现的规则.
【高分句型二】
I can't do everything①I like to do and also②it will be hard for me to realize ③who my really friends are我不能做一些我喜欢的事情,对于我来说分辨谁是真正的朋友也会很难.
①I like是省略了关系词that的定语从句,修饰everything.
②it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的,it是形式主语,动词不定式做真正主语.
 ③who my really friends are作为realize的宾语从句.

解答 My dream job
Everyone has a dream,so do I.My dream job is to be a reporter(当记者).If I become a famous reporter,I will be famous and I will make lots of money.【高分句型一】I will be rich.I can do lots of things.For example,I will be able to travel around the world.I will buy a big house for my parents and a car for myself.(好处)But if I am famous,I may have lots of trouble,my people will watch me all the time and they will follow me here and there,I can't do everything I like to do and also it will be hard for me to realize who my really friends are,【高分句型二】maybe I won't be as happy as it it now.(问题)Do you think so?

点评 写作要抓住要点.要在"准"字上下功夫.在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面.在平时的练习中,注意多背诵范文,对于写的好的句子要进行默写,这样在写作时就能写出准确地道的作文.

练习册系列答案
相关题目

违法和不良信息举报电话:027-86699610 举报邮箱:58377363@163.com

精英家教网