Question

5．三年的初中生活即将结束了，你一定会有很多的感慨，也许是对初中生活的留恋，也许是对师恩的难忘，也许是对友谊的珍惜，又或许是对未来的憧憬…假如在毕业典礼上让你发言，你会说出怎样的毕业感言呢？
短文的开头已给出，但不计入总词数，请写出80词左右的发言稿．
Dear teachers and classmates，
How time flies!We have finished three-years'study here．…
（注意：短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称．）
Dear teachers and classmates
How time flies!We have finished three-years'study here．And I have changed a lot during these years．（开篇点题）
On one hand，I wasn't good at learning English at first．When my English teacher learnt about that，she taught me how to memorize new words and to read as many passages as possible．【高分句型一】Soon I made great progress and became interested in English．（学习的变化）
On the other hand，I was too weak to do much exercise in the past．【高分句型二】But with the help of the teachers and classmates，I do exercise whenever I am free．And now I can run very fast and I'm also good at playing basketball like other boys．（生活的变化）
Thanks to the middle school life，I have changed so much!Thanks to the teachers and classmates，I have learnt so much!Never will I forget the valuable middle school life．（表达感恩之情）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
When my English teacher learnt about that，she taught me how to memorize new words and to read as many passages as possible．
句中"When my English teacher learnt about that"为时间状语从句，句中短语有："learn about 了解"、"as…as possible  尽可能地…"．这句话意为：当我的英语老师了解到这些，她教我怎么记新单词并让我尽可能地多读短文．
高分句型二：
On the other hand，I was too weak to do much exercise in the past．
句中使用短语有"on the other hand 另一方面"、"too…to…太…而不能…"．这句话意为：另一方面，过去我太虚弱了而不能多做运动．

解答 Dear teachers and classmates，
How time flies!We have finished three-years'study here．And I have changed a lot during these years．（开篇点题）
On one hand，I wasn't good at learning English at first．When my English teacher learnt about that，she taught me how to memorize new words and to read as many passages as possible．【高分句型一】Soon I made great progress and became interested in English．（学习的变化）
On the other hand，I was too weak to do much exercise in the past．【高分句型二】But with the help of the teachers and classmates，I do exercise whenever I am free．And now I can run very fast and I'm also good at playing basketball like other boys．（生活的变化）
Thanks to the middle school life，I have changed so much!Thanks to the teachers and classmates，I have learnt so much!Never will I forget the valuable middle school life．（表达感恩之情）

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