Question

17．初中生活中，你有些什么改变？你是怎样改变的？请以"How I have changed"为题写一篇英语小短文，描述你发生的变化，写作内容包括：兴趣爱好、行为习惯、学习习惯等方面．
要求：1．用英语写一篇短文，80词左右．
2．任选两方面内容．
3．语言流畅书写规范，卷面整洁．
4．文中不得使用你的真实姓名校名．
How I have changed      ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
When my English teacher learnt about that，she taught me how to memorize new words and to read as many passages as possible．
句中"When my English teacher learnt about that"为时间状语从句，句中短语有："learn about 了解"、"as…as possible  尽可能地…"．这句话意为：当我的英语老师了解到这些，她教我怎么记新单词并让我尽可能地多读短文．
高分句型二：
On the other hand，I was too weak to do much exercise in the past．
句中使用短语有"on the other hand 另一方面"、"too…to…太…而不能…"．这句话意为：另一方面，过去我太虚弱了而不能多做运动．

解答 How I Have Changed
How time flies!Three years has quickly passed．And I have changed a lot during these years．（开篇点题）
On one hand，I wasn't good at learning English at first．When my English teacher learnt about that，she taught me how to memorize new words and to read as many passages as possible．【高分句型一】Soon I made great progress and became interested in English．（学习的变化）
On the other hand，I was too weak to do much exercise in the past．【高分句型二】But with the help of the teachers and classmates，I do exercise whenever I am free．And now I can run very fast and I'm also good at playing basketball like other boys．（生活的变化）
Thanks to the middle school life，I have changed so much!Thanks to the teachers and classmates，I have learnt so much!Never will I forget the valuable middle school life．（表达感恩）

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